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i remember a day,
not so long ago
where my mind was open
as was my soul

my imagination flew free
weaving story and plan
directing people who were close
and leading them ahead

words came next
my escape from life
thoughts become real
all we need to do is try

as years go by
and my heart is opened
my mind starts to falter
"why must i need both?"

so words stopped coming
leaving me alone for a spell
after waterfalls raged out
dreams were just empty shells

only this was not true
i simply stopped listening
it had never left
just was whispering

so I listen to myself
planning once again
heart not forgotten
both are together now

try as i might
these feelings will still hide
until one day heart
will return to real life
:iconken-ninja:
Soooo.... this is... I don't know. It started with an idea of how My imagination and thoughts have slowly lost themselves over the years, but now I'm trying to listen better. When we are younger we can hear ourselves, but as we grow, its becomes harder.
Then it turned into a more serious poem, about love and how it effected my imagination, and how now I feel and think, instead of one or the other.

So yeah, strange road I took there, its like how I rant, always tangenting. (yay for new word) xD So I guess this is more true to myself in a way, since I act like this unconsciously. =P

p.s. I love how probably the only person who will read this will actually understand, but we don't talk anymore. xD Oh well.
:iconsyrazel:
~Syrazel Jul 8, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Wonderful rhymes and wording in this one =)
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